Absence of Argument
By violetfyre
I don't remember much. We laid in bed. Watched game shows. Said nothing. Hugged. Said nothing. Perfection. I don't remember much. But what I do remember was heaven. Silence. No shouting. No slamming doors. Perfection. **Something is missing. My mind wasn't quite collected when I sat down to write this. I wanted to stop it after "but what i do remember is heaven," but it seemed too short. It still seems very short, but I liked the simplicity in that. I don't want to overdo it but I feel it's lacking something. Any suggestions? Written November 15th, 2001 © on Nov 15 2001 01:02 PM PST 18 • 0 • 10
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"I don't remember much...."