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Ode # 1

By zeusdawg

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I know a girl with hair as soft as silk strands And eyes so blue they’ll make the sky feel guilt and One look’ll make the crazy postal guy a milkman This spilt can of worms, demands to be heard She’s amazing, determined, and I feel for certain That she’s special, I’m curtains, brain’s no longer workin’ She’s got me, crazed not knowing what I’ll say next Blank looks at the grocery store buying playtex Lord knows that I’ve just fallen, I’m so far gone That it wouldn’t be shocking if the world was playing our song My senses just went out the door, vamoose Cuz the great Zeus Dawg just became the dog, Zeus But what can I say, if I’m to lose my brain and my senses Stain up my lenses with rain from the trenches Of the war of my heart, I might as well just sing Cuz everybody in the house knows that the bell must ringI really don't know about lines 11 and 12, they don't seem to gel with the rest, what do you think? Written March 1st, 2002 © on Feb 28 2002 11:26 PM PST   20 • 0 • 8

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