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Decayed

By acidcrys

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i taste you in the dew of my tearsthe sweet champagne flavor of paini see you in the darkness of my fearsthe lurking stranger possessing my braini hear you in the depths of my mindcausing my emotions to rise up in flamesi see you when I'm lost and blindstabbed and wounded by the mind gamesfallen rose petal decaying slowlyits beauty becoming fadedcausing it to become unholyfallen in a world thats oh so jaded.is the last paragraph hard to connect to the rest of the poem? (I mean does it seem out of place or can you understand why its there?) Written September 8th, 2001 © on Sep 08 2001 05:02 AM PST   18 • 0 • 8

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"i taste you in the dew of my tearsthe sweet champagne flavor of paini see you in the darkness of my fearsthe lurking stranger possessing my braini hear you in the depths of my mindcausing my emotions to rise up in flamesi see you when I'm lost and blindstabbed and wounded by the mind gamesfallen rose petal decaying slowlyits beauty becoming fadedcausing it to become unholyfallen in a world thats oh so jaded.is the last paragraph hard to connect to the rest of the poem? (I mean does it seem out of place or can you understand why its there?)..."

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