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Oceans of Unconscious

By atia

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Anger rises and falls hereMoves through the deepWaves lash, screamAnd then subsideAlways unnoticed...Shadows move within the dark Light peers through the murkOnly to see brighter daysLost somewhere withinThe Blue ShadesOf dark and lightSwing back and forthVacillateEmotions like a pendulumBreath can be heardSoft and slowHarsh and loudAnd then all can retreatBack into the untouchedThe unvisited cave of secretsEyes shut, spirits sleepLight disappearsHearts shine, sparkle, gleamScreamAlways unnoticed...This poem is about my unconscious and mind ( or so I think). But for the first time, I actually managed to remove myself from the write. Was actually quite refreshing! :) Written November 28th, 2001 © on Nov 28 2001 11:01 AM PST   18 • 0 • 10

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"Anger rises and falls hereMoves through the deepWaves lash, screamAnd then subsideAlways unnoticed...Shadows move within the dark Light peers through the murkOnly to see brighter daysLost somewhere withinThe Blue ShadesOf dark and lightSwing back and forthVacillateEmotions like a pendulumBreath can be heardSoft and slowHarsh and loudAnd then all can retreatBack into the untouchedThe unvisited cave of secretsEyes shut, spirits sleepLight disappearsHearts shine, sparkle, gleamScreamAlways unnoticed...This poem is about my unconscious and mind ( or so I think). But for the first time, I actually managed to remove myself from the write. Was actually quite refreshing! :)..."

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