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Beneath My Feet

By birksy

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The ground gave way beneath my feet, I thought I was walking, but found I was falling, thought I was falling, but found I was floating, able to direct my descent where I needed to be, perhaps even survive the impact, but I’m not there yet, and I secretly hope, with your help, I’ll find myself rising. Written February 15th, 2002 © on Feb 14 2002 10:02 PM PST, Simon Birks   0 • 12

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