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Hello Mags

By birksy

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Hello Mags, said the grey haired husband whose wife was not called Mags. The couple sit and order tea or coffee And Mags’ husband does not see What may have happened a long time ago. And as the couples talk The man who said ‘Hello’ Watches as intently as one could do, Mags, her stories play and entertain One especially. And the man whose married to Mags speaks to his male friend, who does his very best to listen but the fire in his eyes has gone. When they rise to leave they shake hands, they kiss, But underneath, who can tell, when he says ‘Goodbye Mags’, with that smile. Written March 14th, 1998 © on Aug 13 2001 07:03 AM PST, Simon Birks   0 • 1

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