Trees of deception
By Bletiggre
The taste of your eloquent nectar,...... remain on my tongue.Our sweat swirled together,...... combined as if one.Like two trees growing from the same root,...... our limbs intertwine.Whispered words of passion,..... as our souls align.An aroma of our sexual sin,..... clouding the air we breathe.Plans of a future discussed,..... childish games of make believe.Innocent lovers we have betrayed,..... for a night of feverent lust.Guilt hangs heavily over our heads,..... for now it is us we can no longer trust.The birth of a child,..... smiles all around.My brother's happiness,..... forcec my eyes to the ground.From our tree of deception,..... such a beautiful spawn.But with this guilt,..... we can no longer live on.early poem which i might want to revise any input?? Written September 4th, 2001 © on Sep 04 2001 07:05 AM PST 0 • 1
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"The taste of your eloquent nectar,...... remain on my tongue.Our sweat swirled together,...... combined as if one.Like two trees growing from the same root,...... our limbs intertwine.Whispered words of passion,..... as our souls align.An aroma of our sexual sin,..... clouding the air we breathe.Plans of a future discussed,..... childish games of make believe.Innocent lovers we have betrayed,..... for a night of feverent lust.Guilt hangs heavily over our heads,..... for now it is us we can no longer trust.The birth of a child,..... smiles all around.My brother's happiness,..... forcec my eyes to the ground.From our tree of deception,..... such a beautiful spawn.But with this guilt,..... we can no longer live on.early poem which i might want to revise any input??..."