Forever
By Boekhtiar
ForeverThe aspen is forever green,Where friendship lingers innocently,Under the dance of a thousand leaves,Blessed by the angelic whispers of serenity.The sun is forever bright,Where gaiety does festive warmly,Above shadowy thoughts put aside,Remembered no more, but happily.The water is forever clear,Where the myriad of gentle dream sleeps,Between boundless there and here,Purified by a lonely, repented weep.The moon is forever sublime,Where darkness dwells silently,Benighted in the wintry mist of time, Coveted no more, but sorrowfully.By Boekhtiar (circa 2000)1999, This is one of my old poems. I'm particularly worried about the rhythm. What do you all think about it? Written November 27th, 2001 © on Nov 26 2001 05:30 PM PST 0 • 12
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"ForeverThe aspen is forever green,Where friendship lingers innocently,Under the dance of a thousand leaves,Blessed by the angelic whispers of serenity.The sun is forever bright,Where gaiety does festive warmly,Above shadowy thoughts put aside,Remembered no more, but happily.The water is forever clear,Where the myriad of gentle dream sleeps,Between boundless there and here,Purified by a lonely, repented weep.The moon is forever sublime,Where darkness dwells silently,Benighted in the wintry mist of time, Coveted no more, but sorrowfully.By Boekhtiar (circa 2000)1999, This is one of my old poems. I'm particularly worried about the rhythm. What do you all think about it?..."