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Closing in

By brokenworthlessness

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

I feel as if this blackened sky is closing in on me. It's attacking me. It's killing me. I feel as if all the hate all your hate is slicing away at my already shattered heart. I feel as if this lonliness is closing in on my soul. leaving only lonliness Only pain. Only hunger. I feel as if this whole damned world Is closing in on me. stealing my hope. Stealing my dreams. Stealing my faith. It's closing in on me. Drowning me. Sufficating me. Killing me. Written December 22nd, 2001 © on Dec 22 2001 01:45 PM PST   18 • 0 • 10

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