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By Burnt at both ends

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as far as all that shit goes i haven't a clue yeah, well I coulda got spanked for it...! *laughing* spankYOU too very much muthafucka! ...I know it's 'the breaks', I know it's the freakin''break's' so anyway .... i was telling you 'bout this dream I had... no, you weren't in it, and neither was your mother, this time! *laughs hard* *coughs* yeah well, i was lost again... this time with some old college friends.. we were sort of exploring and sorta trying to get back to my dorm room. huh? yeah, lost... lookiing for something , but sorta having an interesting time trying to find it... yeah! just like that other dream I told you about.... ...no.... but the really cool thing was that I saw my feet...wearing my hiking boots...as i bounced down the stairs...carpeted stairs... no... dude... it was so cool...i mean I have NEVER in my life had a single thought about this 'way' that I go down stairs...sometimes....not since I was younger....... other than actually doing it...stepping on the corners of the stairs, slipping down to the next step...each step...what? I don't know, it's a fun carefree feeling...I love it... anyway, yeah, so, that was part of it, and then we keep opening doors and be surprised as to what we find there....always leading somewhere else, well that's not true, there was some element of going around in circles...but still, we opened one door and ended up in a giant ballroom where everyone was wear ball room dress... everyone turned and looked at us shocked.. we kind of scooted past to somewhere else...geez so many crazy vivid details from obscure parts of my life.... that I loved... in some way. No, I didn't want to wake up from it.... yeah, was cool dreaming... NO, I don't want to hear vivid details of your sick perverted dreams...... *laughing* ..you DREAMED you ate a giant marshmallow? ...shut up! oh, your pillow was gone when you woke...fuckyou that's so old... Really?....huh.................weird... that's not right.... when did you dream this? ... I don't know... I heard dreams fullfill wishes...things you want... yeah, I would be disturbed too... My friend...you ARE weird... what do you expect...? *laughs* ... I think there is more to it than THAT... you probably just remember the parts you wanna remember cause you are so freakin twisted that way... and you want to KEEP thinking yourself as a twisted mutherfucka!!!! .....well if you don't wanna tell me... i don't wanna know... ...so...?...you can kill anyone you like in your dreams, man... ....well how did you FEEL about it though... ....ok, almost the same as jerking off except you didn't really enjoy it! *laughing* You are just REALY REALLY R E A L L Y PISSED OFF about something going on between you two....and you are having some tiny conflict about it. No! i won't tell her....YOU tell her!!! you can, man... she loves you for some reason....what i don't know... ...*laughs* ok...ok...*laughs*... an I love you too, dude... I know, I know... you gotta go, me too really, it's late. OK, take it easy...and say hi for me .... bye.... *tears forming inyou have to enclose the stage directions in asterisks Is it hard to tell this is just one side of a phone conversation between 2 really good friends? Written February 13th, 2002 © on Feb 12 2002 08:06 PM PST   0 • 14

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