Feelings
By charente
For the great big hemisphere there is discontent.For the treatment of minorities there is irritation.Pain and concern for lunatics with God's premium.Occupants which none are of the human kind.For the importance of the all mighty dollar.you 'll find deflated hopes saturated with hollow wanting.A young life stricken with disappointment in mankind.Fights for happiness in the follies of youth.Affected by what's commonly known as the norm.We must repel being drawn into encouraged conformity.Resentment, greed, and hate are foul reflections now.Time to cross the bourne of ones mind.Be eager not weary,Be refreshed not forlorn.Strike out with charged zeal and passionate zest.For the concept of mankind surely must arise.From the murky depth's we display as common.This was one of the hardest poems I have ever written,and would love to have anyone give me their opinion of it. Written October 9th, 2001 © on Oct 09 2001 11:36 AM PST 0 • 9
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"For the great big hemisphere there is discontent.For the treatment of minorities there is irritation.Pain and concern for lunatics with God's premium.Occupants which none are of the human kind.For the importance of the all mighty dollar.you 'll find deflated hopes saturated with hollow wanting.A young life stricken with disappointment in mankind.Fights for happiness in the follies of youth.Affected by what's commonly known as the norm.We must repel being drawn into encouraged conformity.Resentment, greed, and hate are foul reflections now.Time to cross the bourne of ones mind.Be eager not weary,Be refreshed not forlorn.Strike out with charged zeal and passionate zest.For the concept of mankind surely must arise.From the murky depth's we display as common.This was one of the hardest poems I have ever written,and would love to have anyone give me their opinion of it...."