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No one else

By dancechica

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

No one cares about me. No one, but you. Life brings so many complications Problems arise, many bumps on lifes road. Everyone wants advice. Everyone wants everything right Can I make it right? No, No one can No one, but you. You make my life right Even when the road is at its hardest No one knows what I go through No one, but you. I love you! There are many things that i love. There are many things that make me happy. But who makes me the happiest? No one. No one, but you. LIfe is full of its ups and downs It seems as if mine has more downs. No one wants to hear about my problems. No one wants to give me advice. No one, but you. Many people come and go. There are people you hate your whole life. There are some who you love. There is no one else I could love, my whole life, as much as i love you. NO ONE. No one, but you.Please be totally critical of my writing!! I'm an ametuer and i don't really know if what i write sounds good. I appreciate any advice that is given to me! Thanks!! Written April 16th, 2002 © on Apr 16 2002 09:15 AM PST   18 • 0 • 8

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