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Vibrant and velvet

By Deb Benson

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

I have taken Robert Burns line  Oh my love is like a red, red rose and put a little twist on it Our love is like a red, red rose Vibrant and velvet Carrying us skyward Wrapping us in softness Sprinkling our souls with Dew kissed petals Thornless by design Our love is like a red, red rose Vibrant and Velvet DBenson 1/31/02 Written January 31st, 2002 © on Jan 31 2002 09:35 AM PST   10 • 0 • 8

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