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Her smile

By DocMccurdy

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Whenever I pass her by, she smilesHer eyes glow, then my heart, it flutters,I want to tell her, please don't,her smile;  like a snakes venom,If it touches me, then I shall die.Her Smile!As if  life itself,But too strong for me to sustain.Yet, I want to reach out to her,To be a part of her world,then, surely, I realize the outcome.I wish that she has some affections,Not to take advantage of her powers,To release me from this trance.Yet; is this what my true desire?For if she ever stops smiling,Then anyway . . .  I shall die! Written January 11th, 1996 © on Oct 27 2001 10:53 PM PST   0 • 8

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"Whenever I pass her by, she smilesHer eyes glow, then my heart, it flutters,I want to tell her, please don't,her smile;  like a snakes venom,If it touches me, then I shall die.Her Smile!As if  life itself,But too strong for me to sustain.Yet, I want to reach out to her,To be a part of her world,then, surely, I realize the outcome.I wish that she has some affections,Not to take advantage of her powers,To release me from this trance.Yet; is this what my true desire?For if she ever stops smiling,Then anyway . . .  I shall die!..."

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