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Falling Down

By Dream

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Be quick to say helloBefore I really goBe sure to say goodbyeWhen I leave you here to dieKeep fresh in your mind the way I kissFor it will be the thing you most missAnd remember how I'd make you smileIt was tainted all the whilePlease don't forget just how I tasteWhen I leave you here disgracedDon't forget the reason whyWhy I'd rather leave you highIt was me who picked you off the floorAnd now I've crushed you even moreBe sure to remember the lies I toldThey're all that's left when you are coldI leave you with the painful truthAnd you find it's too hard to swallowI won't be here to feel your sorrowSo here is were I let you fallWhat we had was really nothing at all......The Lonely PoetThis one is perfect for it's way of describing how I felt, I did this by letting you feel the poem through the eyes of the Perpetrator....tell me what ya think?~Dream;) Written September 4th, 2001 © on Sep 04 2001 01:35 AM PST   0 • 1

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"Be quick to say helloBefore I really goBe sure to say goodbyeWhen I leave you here to dieKeep fresh in your mind the way I kissFor it will be the thing you most missAnd remember how I'd make you smileIt was tainted all the whilePlease don't forget just how I tasteWhen I leave you here disgracedDon't forget the reason whyWhy I'd rather leave you highIt was me who picked you off the floorAnd now I've crushed you even moreBe sure to remember the lies I toldThey're all that's left when you are coldI leave you with the painful truthAnd you find it's too hard to swallowI won't be here to feel your sorrowSo here is were I let you fallWhat we had was really nothing at all......The Lonely PoetThis one is perfect for it's way of describing how I felt, I did this by letting you feel the poem through the eyes of the Perpetrator....tell me what ya think?~Dream;)..."

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