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Shock

By FifthRing

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Acting like a mad-girl, head like a hammer, tasting like a raindrop. Give in to her manner, feeling like a bad boy. You got the look. Touch you like a spasm, shake you like a handful. Feel your body shiver, fills you with her sensual. Pleasure like a new toy. Your mind she took. Hit you with her power, burning like a fireside. Feeling like you're given to, total mental suicide. Laying on a land mine, before you shook. Soaking in the rain, quaking with the thunder. Feel your body screaming, when you had to leave her. Waiting until next time. You got the look.. . . Kass poem #4. This poem is half about her and half written to the song, "The Look", by Roxette. If you're new to this, The Kass Collection starts with, "A Kick In The Pass". . . . Written November 9th, 1993 © on Apr 15 2002 06:00 AM PST   0 • 8

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