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Broken Hearted (#4)

By flamesofrage13

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

When you said 'I love you' I felt like somebody. When you called me beautiful and touched my body, I felt wanted. When you told me you'd always be there, I believed you. Until one day when I reached for your hand, and it was gone. I tripped. And tumbled down the stairs of our love, each one hitting me harder than the one before. Each stair brought back a memory of you. They made me see the real you, that had been there all along, I'd just been to blind to see. Now I sit at the bottom, staring at my broken heart, lying on the floor. Written October 5th, 2001 © on Oct 06 2001 04:51 AM PST   0 • 10 • 8

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