Fire
By hifigurl1
Your in your bed silently asleep suddenly you start to breath real deep. Now you feel hot all around, you roll off your bed and on to the ground. There's smoke all in the air, you feel it start burning and melting your hair. Your scared and frozen like ice, when suddenly the heat startes to rise. You feel hot tears run down the side of your hot face, right now you wanna be any other place. You slowly crawl for the door , then you feel the heat rise even more. You feel it at your feet rising up to your head and you know in your mind you will soon be dead. As you lay there helplessly in front of the door you cant feel your body anymore. you cry for help hoping someone will hear, then you realize noone is near. the fire is around you cutting off your breath, as you smell the stinch of death. Now your life is coming to an end, you take one last breath and never breath again Written March 15th, 2002 © on Mar 15 2002 01:30 AM PST, Nicole 0 • 1
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"Your in your bed silently asleep suddenly you start to breath real deep. Now you feel hot all around, you roll off your bed and on to the ground. There's smoke all in the air, you feel it start burning and melting your hair. Your scared and frozen like ice, when suddenly the heat startes to rise. You feel hot tears run down the side of your hot face, right now you wanna be any other place. You slowly crawl for the door , then you feel the heat rise even more. You feel it at your feet rising up to your head and you know in your mind you will soon be dead. As you lay there helplessly in front of the door you cant feel your body anymore. you cry for help hoping someone will hear, then you realize noone is near. the fire is around you cutting off your breath, as you smell the stinch of death. Now your life is coming to an end, you take one last breath and never breath again..."