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When Hatred Goes Too far

By IfOnlyLifeWereFair

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The hatred rises in my throat as I stare straight at my enemy. Oh how I want to shatter the monsters skull and watch it cower into a dark corner. The beast within me is getting hungry for violence and sends a wave of heat through my body like a white hot electric shock. I cry out in anger and throw myself to the ground as the tears flow down my cheeks like they were water falls. I clench my fists and hit the monster head on. The demon roars loudly inside me and tells me to kill. I ignore this command and cry out to the heavens. I feel the evil inside me burst like a huge baloon. I lunge at my enemy once more knocking it off of its feet feeling the pain in my heart. I hurt you did I not? I spit at my foe. I can kill you! You might want to run now because I am completely crazed!!! I must warn you the demon has been released and wants death for you. I feel my blood boil as I jump at my enemy and rip at its throat. "It has been done my friend" I hear a distant voice say. I open my eyes to a crowd around my enemy and I. I look down and see a fragile body lying face down in a pool of blood. "It has been done my friend." the voice says again. It sounds demonic and mesmorizing at the same time. "NO!!!!!" I scream as the ambulance comes and takes me away. "I killed her!!!!" How could this happen!!! I see the paramedics take the small girl into the ambulance but her head is covered with that grey plastic tarp that can only mean one thing DEATH.... So let this be a lesson to you. Don't let hate control your mind because this is what happens When Hatred Goes Too Far Written April 2nd, 2002 © on Apr 02 2002 01:23 PM PST   10 • 0 • 1

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"The hatred rises in my throat as I stare straight at my enemy. Oh how I want to shatter the monsters skull and watch it cower into a dark corner. The beast within me is getting hungry for violence and sends a wave of heat through my body like a white hot electric shock. I cry out in anger and throw myself to the ground as the tears flow down my cheeks like they were water falls. I clench my fists and hit the monster head on. The demon roars loudly inside me and tells me to kill. I ignore this command and cry out to the heavens. I feel the evil inside me burst like a huge baloon. I lunge at my enemy once more knocking it off of its feet feeling the pain in my heart. I hurt you did I not? I spit at my foe. I can kill you! You might want to run now because I am completely crazed!!! I must warn you the demon has been released and wants death for you. I feel my blood boil as I jump at my enemy and rip at its throat. "It has been done my friend" I hear a distant voice say. I open my eyes to a crowd around my enemy and I. I look down and see a fragile body lying face down in a pool of blood. "It has been done my friend." the voice says again. It sounds demonic and mesmorizing at the same time. "NO!!!!!" I scream as the ambulance comes and takes me away. "I killed her!!!!" How could this happen!!! I see the paramedics take the small girl into the ambulance but her head is covered with that grey plastic tarp that can only mean one thing DEATH......."

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