greenroad to red
By kevin
I was angry at you - fire-emotion-drips. slips away at yourarrival, replaced ofcourse by feelings, more subtle I can never predict ourtimetogether - you're assertive: I like that & follow this greenroad leads to red, &from red to whiteyes, the spacing is intentional. I was influenced by e.e. cummings in my early poetic days (ok I guess I still am, but I do the word-combining thing less). I think wordcombining give us a additional level of creativitiy over standard language, and makes ya think about how you really want it to sound, not how you're forced to have it sound. Written January 25th, 1999 © on Jun 27 2000 05:47 PM PST, Kevin Watt 0 • 8
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