Giving Yourself (The Thirst) ~CHALLENGE~

Dost thou know how it feels, so good, To be suckled and sensually caressed? I've tasted thy flesh, thy crimson blood, Its warmth, so intoxicatingly intense I've touched thy deepest inner forces, Hidden desires, pulled back passion's reins I drank the sweet nectar of the Source, Saw thy future burn within those fiery veins Do thy virgin nipples long to harden with wanton lust?, Dost thou crave all that is wrong, but have it ye must? Corporeal flames of life and death breathe into now's being, Aether's cardinal power, all-knowing, hearing and seeing Dost thou remember how it felt, naïve pleasures so great, To awaken to a fun, new toy of thy own and be its first? So surreal to savor, such yearnings nevermore to sate, Give thyself unto me; feed thy hunger, drown thy thirst All thy darkest dreams and wishes shall be yours to tempt fate, Bathe naked beneath moonbeams; eternally blissful joys, want for none I'll be thy new toy, thou art my nocturnal underground playmate, Return thee to love's immortal kiss of death; soon, kindred one (c) 12/00 SmSChallenge Description: Write me an erotic poem that will make me want to find you and make love to you/or write one that will make me want to grab the nearest guy and do likewise. Make me hot without using any vulgar, filthy or slang language. I am looking for sizzle. (by Sprite) This is one of my few "erotic" poems. I wrote this originally without all the early modern English (thy, thou, thee). I'm a little rusty in that area, so if you don't like it, I'll change it back to the way I had it with "you, yours", etc. It fits in w/the Baroque/Goth-era (Vampyre) theme. Dark, erotic romanticism... "Come, let me bite you in the neck!" :) Written February 3rd, 2002 © on Jul 24 2002 03:32 PM PST, Sheryl Marcia Schwartz   0 • 16