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Score One Point For Victory

By Lone Poet

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Life is one cool ice hockey game and pucks are our human lives rules and penalties are the same, but only that lucky point arrives the hockey sticks are Mr. Fate who wisely decides which way to go oversees both side's 6 teammates, paces goalie, if he skates too fast or slow God is heaven's crazy official referee, faces off and calls illegal slapshots sinners sit ablaze in a penalty box for 333, maybe forever if their evil body rots Satan is the weak contender, poor loser lacks any real skill benched, a sneaky pretender, he's good at stealing free will watch out for him, he cheats when the referee is unaware, lights matches to your seats and starts fights on every dare but when that final bell rings and the season nears its end, Hell's rink freezes when Fate brings a winner, as God awaits, "Amen"!! His Angels won the game fair and square, they rule aren't you glad you came, and missed Sunday School? so score one big point for victory and none at all for the Devils' team Hate's not on the player directory, nor living this great American dream (c) 9.26.01 SmS~~~Just a silly little observation of life. I'm in the process of trying to change some things in this, so let me know if you like it as is, or should I add anything?~~~ Written February 6th, 2002 © on Feb 05 2002 05:48 PM PST, Sheryl Marcia Schwartz   14 • 12 • 7

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