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A structure greater than any architectual feat. The walls have been built; and they surround my heart. Disassociated with all forms of reality; I live in my dreams. In my head I can love and be loved. In my heart it's cold, dark, dead. Outwardly, the charm and sincerity are abundant. Inwardly, black fillsthe smallest corners of my soul. Illusions of grandeur almost seem within reach... Once I close my eyes and shut the world off around me. After they're opened I see that I'm one of the lost ones. So I don't let anyone get too close to me. I'd rather feel nothing at all, than the pain of rejection. Written February 13th, 2002 © on Feb 13 2002 03:54 AM PST   18 • 0 • 10

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