'How does one find love upon the petals?………….'
By nytepoetry
'When love is read let droplets upon a rose…….. Counted by the masses........ But left to shine and glitter on its own………. And we let pain run its course…….. I hold the rose…………. I count the droplets……….. But I am cut by it’s thorns……….. And now my blood is added to the masses…….. Left to be counted and passed....... Just like the rest of the droplets…….. So tender is the red rose………. And we wonder why it is red………. Moistened by the mist of love………… The dew of affection which settles upon the petals………… And I add my drop of blood……… Hoping that the mist, the dew........... The petals and the thorns ………. Just might be what we call love……… How I want love to be……. -nytepoetryStructure if anything, Just rough draft, what do you think? Written October 17th, 2001 © on Oct 17 2001 12:00 PM PST, J.C. Jeffrey 18 • 0 • 8
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"'When love is read let droplets upon a rose…….. ..."