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You Are My Ventilator

By pinkmouthedgirl

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

I'm ready for you Now. Perpetually Waiting Always going mad With emptiness. Hollowed out bark Though the tree looks fine She is frozen Nobody knows she's dead Until The lightning strikes And she turns to The dust she is inside. This dream fades in and out As the sphere continues The struggle For existence You are my ventilatorI know this is a bit all-over-the-place but it just came out of my head like that. I'm not sure if it's finished or if it needs an extra bit before the last line. Any thoughts? Louise x Written March 10th, 2002 © on Mar 30 2002 11:10 PM PST, Louise Bell   0 • 8

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