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I Showed Him My Poem Today...

By Pityful Me

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Showed him "Chained To A Married Man" today My latest poem I had written No words were spoken I have to ask him "Well? What do you think?" "Ha Ha" he says "pretty good" "I'll write YOU one sometime I'll blow YOU away!" "Huh? That's it?" Okay didn't expect critical kudos From a grave digger YES I SAID GRAVE DIGGER But, damn what's to understand the word of morality "What? Couldn't read my pain?" It was laid bare on the page Waiting for your response All I get was "pretty good" No comment on context "What? Did you only see the words Sex, Pussy and Morality?" "ASSSSSSHOLE!!!!!!!!!" Write me a poem indeed Perhaps yours more chained By you illiterate Thinking only with your penis's mind You are to your bloody wife  AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! "TAKE THIS PROSE AND SHOVE IT!!" Written February 1st, 2002 © on Jan 31 2002 10:18 PM PST   0 • 10

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