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i miss you

By rmerwin

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Did i tell you that i love you before you went awayCould i have alluded how i'd need you here todayYour breath that brushed me gently touched me softlyfilled my heartDid i tell you that i love youbefore our worlds just fell apartDo you look on me from heavencan you feel me missing youCould you take away the pain now pleaseit's all that i can doto go onOur children grow so quicklyChelsea has your smileEvey time she gigglesi feel i have you for awhileDid i tell you that i love you enough times to make you stayIf i could have loved you morewould you still be here todayi miss you here beside mesinging softlyto my hearti wish that God had told me that one day we'd be aparti miss you. Written October 4th, 2001 © on Oct 04 2001 10:36 AM PST, Rick Merwin   0 • 1

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"Did i tell you that i love you before you went awayCould i have alluded how i'd need you here todayYour breath that brushed me gently touched me softlyfilled my heartDid i tell you that i love youbefore our worlds just fell apartDo you look on me from heavencan you feel me missing youCould you take away the pain now pleaseit's all that i can doto go onOur children grow so quicklyChelsea has your smileEvey time she gigglesi feel i have you for awhileDid i tell you that i love you enough times to make you stayIf i could have loved you morewould you still be here todayi miss you here beside mesinging softlyto my hearti wish that God had told me that one day we'd be aparti miss you...."

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