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When I Go

By Rubee

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WHEN I GO When you lose me You will cry for your loss You will then understand the pain That was in my heart for so long You will wish for the hours that were wasted The times you neglected to think were important You will feel the emptiness That I've felt many times without you You will wish for those Crazy days when I made you laugh You will miss my child-like ways And my innocence You will long for my gentle touch And sweet caresses You will miss the passion that lurks Inside the woman that is in me I have not yet gone But only give you fair warning For it won't be much longer Then I will have to be on my way And though I'll love you til my end I can no longer pretend The spaces don't hurt my very soul If you fail to see it now There will be no reason For me to stay *~PennyLynne~*I thought I'd give free style a shot. This took me all of 3 min to write so if it's not well accepted, no problem LOL I'm open to any critisism or comment on my work. Written March 11th, 2002 © on Mar 11 2002 09:19 AM PST   0 • 10

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