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forgotten stars can never laugh for nothing change floating clouds or strife of dying sun that sees only life elsewhere no pain, no will, left in our time until the music silences your bird dies - space, time, being stop no realizations held unless you listen to the songs sung in torn note and thin fingers broken useless little sounds of no one just a little visit from the other side wishing to press through to see the sunok I revised this one because it was a pretty crappy little poem and full of half sentences the whole way through. Ok its still crappy but its better now:) this I wrote originally about 5 months ago and my style has really changed Written December 30th, 2001 © on Dec 30 2001 01:04 PM PST 0 • 10
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"forgotten stars can never laugh ..."