Time to kill...(Nam challenge winner)
By Shashama
Challenge Description: write me a poem with the first stanza's each last line rhyming, i.e.: i went to the park it was dark i went with my friend Mark then i want the first words of the second stanza to rhyme with the last lines of the first, continue for 10 stanza's. you can add more if you want. :0) Nam (100 points) ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Will I get my happy ending? Still, I’m stuck on patent pending Kill real and fake’s constant blending Until it’s myself I am defending Sending letters to the sea Pretending that I’m really free Unending wounds won’t let me be Befriending people just like me Degree rising into the sky Plea with you to let me fly Disagree and make me cry Flee; just know that I’ll still try My tears fall down to the floor Sigh ‘cause I can cry no more Dry my eyes, still feeling poor Why? I’m empty to the core Or maybe I’m stronger yet For my destiny’s not set Nor a reason I should fret Soar through clouds so newly met Let you mind control the plot Bet you leave, it’s there to rot Regret your actions; forget not Forget you will, the whole lot Shots are fired, high into air Hot passion’s love is not always there Blot it out, ‘cause it’s not fair Knot in stomach, it’s real I swear Err is human, so I despise Affairs are always simple lies Flares go up, reflect in eyes Aware to children’s lonesome cries Advise me how you cannot hate Supplies are low; it must be fate Wise are those who were not late Goodbyes are needed in this state Wait for me, stay for the thrill Date and time grows closer still Berate my words, in voice so shrill Await the time when I will kill Written April 18th, 2002 © on Apr 18 2002 10:29 AM PST, Shayla Carter 18 • 0 • 10
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"Challenge Description: write me a poem with the first stanza's each last line rhyming, i.e.: i went to the park it was dark i went with my friend Mark then i want the first words of the second stanza to rhyme with the last lines of the first, continue for 10 stanza's. you can add more if you want. :0) Nam (100 points)..."