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Am I Taking Your Place...?

By silentspeaker

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Am I taking your place...? Am I horning in on what you think is rightfully yours? Am I just getting in your way? Am I just another obstacle to surpass? Do I just get in your way? I'm sorry you feel that way really am. But I don't think that it is entirely my fault. If you had been there, he would not have come to me. If you had listened to him, he would not have come to me, complaining about a girl. So go ahead. Go around me. Pass right through me. You've already told me that you don't care whom you hurt, as long as you get the prize. Well the one getting hurt is not I. It is you, ultimately in the end, it will be you. No, you won't be hurting me. You will be hurting yourself, by placing a guy over your friends. You don't care whom you hurt, I think you forgot to say something there. You don't care whom you hurt, unless it is yourself. Because that is all who you seem to care about right now .you know who you are...and yes that comment did hurt me.. i dont even think you remember it... but it hurt me. Written March 10th, 2002 © on Mar 10 2002 01:41 PM PST   18 • 0 • 1

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