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I Can Feel The Fat (challenge)

By silentspeaker

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Challenge Description: Write a poem about a criticism you have about society or something you question society for. What is wrong with society today? What does society put too much emphasis on? How can society be hypocritical? (*Just some things to think about*) (25 points) B eing who I am, is all I care about. E ating is a thing i only do when my friends make me. I eat when my friends are around. N utrition is a thing of the past. G etting skinny is all I want to do. S kin and bones is all I wish to be. K ind of like that girl I see in those magazines. I wish to be just like her, so I can wear what ever I want. N othing not going to eat. And when I do. It will come back up. N othing fattening. Nothing that could add one pound to my already fat body. Y hy you ask? Well because, I see all those skinny girlies around, who complain about how fat they are. Well if they are fat.... Then what the heck am I...?yesh..... Written February 15th, 2002 © on Feb 18 2002 01:18 PM PST   18 • 0 • 9

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