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Snow

By silentspeaker

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Snow Little falling patterns of lace Falling breathlessly around my face I'm standing there smiling, looking up in the sky Looking, and longing to fly I clime up on the roof and look down, A little apprehensive, and start to frown. As I take my final step, I realize that I'm not the only one Who will be affected by this, too late it's already done As I fall I see my life flash before my eyes, All those promises that turned into lies As I lay there in the snow listening to sirens wailing And think of all the things I'm failing I'm failing my family, my friends, and all of humanity I might be loosing my life but I'm not loosing my sanity The snow is all I have left, all that lies around me As I slip in to darkness I realize I can't see My vision is gone, now what can I rely on??? I'm dying, laying here on the lawn Covered in SNOWok this is the first one that i have on here that rhymes so tell me what you think...please be honest... Written December 2nd, 2001 © on Dec 01 2001 03:51 PM PST   0 • 12

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