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Danced With Me(Published)

By Silver Angel

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

I don't ask him to dance, it makes him uncomfortable But watching the other couples dance breaks my heart I see them holding each other close and see their love I know he loves me, he just shows it in different ways So imagine my surprise when he took my hand and with out words, lead me to the dance floor My heart was pumping, my breath almost gone As he wrapped his arms about me, and spun me around Time stood still, and I wanted it to last forever Showing the world that I am his girl It may be another year before he dances again So I'll remember this moment the rest of my life What he wore, how he smelled, seeing on his face The most wonderful smile So in the future, when I see couples dance I will remember this moment, when he danced with me Written October 9th, 2001 © on Oct 09 2001 08:04 AM PST   0 • 8

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