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A rest stop on the way to place I'd rather be

By sneaker

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

Let me get your bags, please No problem at all All part of the service Always at your call How is your dinner Have a nice day How was the weather Did you enjoy your stay Leaving the B and B Come back and again soon I say to the couple and remember the June when you were hereI need to polish up the ending. I'm not happy with it as it is. I think I loose the journey aspect I was shooting for Written August 9th, 2001 © on Aug 29 2001 03:56 PM PST   0 • 1

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