Raindrop
By sneaker
dripping, falling gravity calling nearer my earth to thee branch to stem then fall again all the way down the tree down from the crown past leaves now brown still struggling to be free the ground below is where I must go fulfilling my destiny'Well, procrastinating makes one do strange things like this challenge. This is what I came up with in about two minutes. How'd I do?'---------------------------------------Looking back I think I meant to write another stanza, I'm feeling cut off. I reposted this here because I wrote this in an unusual style for me, and because it's the first thing I've written in a long time and I don't want people to forget me.----------------------------------Added the final (third) stanza, now it feels better to me. Written October 20th, 2001 © on Oct 22 2001 01:27 PM PST 0 • 10
AI analysis available. Enable JavaScript to interact.
About this line
"dripping, falling..."