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*~*Me*~*

By snochica149

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

I am a whirlwind of profound thoughts, I spit the truth in your face like an icy winter wind, I am tangy and sweet, I bloom like a flower with everyday i live. I rock long and hard to mind blowing punk rock, And Out of my mind flows powerful words and deep thought. My souls flutters like a butterfly free and merry, I radiate a simple yet wonderous beauty, I am a star in the night time sky. I see with my heart not my eyes I speak with my soul not my brain People hate me because I'm unique and independent But me....I just laugh because they are all the same.AH yes finally my writers block has be lifted like a shutter blocking my rays of thought. Well here it is my first poem in like a month i think. Tell me what you think i could do to improve it. Written December 12th, 2001 © on Dec 12 2001 06:28 AM PST   18 • 0 • 10

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