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Comatose: Dedicated to the heads of the world

By Soul Churner

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

Trying not to view you As another piece of ass, I doze off to your world For seconds of mass confusion. Reality floats me to the surface. I gasp for another breath, Forsaking you behind To your dark abyss. Rummaging your deep waters, Delving you for depth, I swim up empty-handed, As you drown in the shallowness. Written April 18th, 2002 © on Apr 18 2002 03:38 PM PST, wendy tyler    18 • 0 • 1

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