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The Undressing

By Soul Churner

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

His form burned out the murkiness of twilight To etch memories of a monument of perfection. He lit quite a vision for my fatigued eyesight, Stretching out into this chiseled mass. Smooth and hard and yet unscarred, Firmed by nature that has been kind. Giving me his complete and undivided attention With a boldness so modest and a sentiment so divine.Now that you've read this, go ahead and read "Comatose: Dedication to the heads of the world." It is a follow up of this one. Written March 13th, 2002 © on Mar 13 2002 03:51 AM PST, wendy tyler    18 • 0 • 10

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Author:Soul Churner

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