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Open Roads Of Broken Hope

By StraNgleDFicTioN

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

...These eyes are open...View this place as a perfect world.This vision we call life will never crumble into nothing.Loved ones bring loved life, for these special ones will never change or leave. The road of existence is infinite knowing this happiness will never end.Broken words will be stitched together by the certain faith of perfect beings....These eyes are frozen within a blink...Darkness is now bringing unwanted thoughts.This wonderful existence could never change within a second.Pathways are still open, for nothing can destroy the road.There will always be deep meaning to shallow minded words.Tomorrow will wait forever as long as it has good reason....Again......These eyes are open...A perfect vision is now a haunted image of what these eyes once viewed.This feeling of nothingness is brought on by the crumbling of perfection.Although many words are broken, that faithful remedy is nowhere to be found.It seems as though there is little deep meaning to the words of this shallow place.Loved ones have crossed over, realizing that the road of this unforgiving place will come to an end, allowing tomorrow to wait forever in it's infinite existence.sometime in 2001, Written November 25th, 2001 © on Nov 24 2001 08:01 PM PST   18 • 0 • 10

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"...These eyes are open...View this place as a perfect world.This vision we call life will never crumble into nothing.Loved ones bring loved life, for these special ones will never change or leave. The road of existence is infinite knowing this happiness will never end.Broken words will be stitched together by the certain faith of perfect beings....These eyes are frozen within a blink...Darkness is now bringing unwanted thoughts.This wonderful existence could never change within a second.Pathways are still open, for nothing can destroy the road.There will always be deep meaning to shallow minded words.Tomorrow will wait forever as long as it has good reason....Again......These eyes are open...A perfect vision is now a haunted image of what these eyes once viewed.This feeling of nothingness is brought on by the crumbling of perfection.Although many words are broken, that faithful remedy is nowhere to be found.It seems as though there is little deep meaning to the words of this shallow place.Loved ones have crossed over, realizing that the road of this unforgiving place will come to an end, allowing tomorrow to wait forever in it's infinite existence.sometime in 2001, ..."

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