life's moment (doorway)
By surreal song
~ u no ~ one day i was leaving a room and i came upon the door, the ones with a metal grill so u see light from outside flowing in and i saw a shadow i think and i opened the door, and it opens out wards and i turn the knob and push it forward and there's a girl on the otherside who was trying to get in thru the door but i was there pushing the door out while she was trying to grab the door knob and enter the room so she jumped back where upon i looked upon her face and i thought, "i caused her to jump back" and i say "hi!" and she smiles and laughs and says "hi!" and i walk pass and so does she and i walk upon the mud and try to lightly step across ...........and walk under the trees.........should read while listening to the grand finale of gladitor, or... better yet, listen to the last 40 secs of the battle track, i no, i change tenses like nothing at all, but its a poem Written March 27th, 2002 © on Mar 27 2002 02:43 PM PST 18 • 0 • 10
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