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It Shakes Me

By swf27texas

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It put a chill down my spine when you said you loved me.It put a tear down my cheek when you told me how much.It put a throb in my heart when you held me real tight.It put a smile on my face when you kissed me good night.But it's breaking me up when you stop taking up.The hurting inside is just building up.It shakes me up the way you talk about breaking up.Not even making up, just splitting up.I used to be the strong one, I used to be the one in control.Now I'm begging you not to break up and you just want to let go.It puts a chill down my spine when I say that I love you.It puts a tear down my cheek when you don't want to hold me. Written October 30th, 2001 © on Oct 29 2001 04:07 PM PST   0 • 8

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"It put a chill down my spine when you said you loved me.It put a tear down my cheek when you told me how much.It put a throb in my heart when you held me real tight.It put a smile on my face when you kissed me good night.But it's breaking me up when you stop taking up.The hurting inside is just building up.It shakes me up the way you talk about breaking up.Not even making up, just splitting up.I used to be the strong one, I used to be the one in control.Now I'm begging you not to break up and you just want to let go.It puts a chill down my spine when I say that I love you.It puts a tear down my cheek when you don't want to hold me...."

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