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The Moon

By Treas

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Tonight I looked up at the moon I thought "I wonder if you're looking at it too." I starred at it for minutes In the deepest thought Maybe for a moment, togetherness was caught. Of all the times we always say "We'll meet, there'll be a special day." It all collides in my mind Peace and serenity i will find. Knowing you're out there, thousand miles away Looking at the same thing, the same thing as I Makes me happy, it makes me cry It makes me gain a sense of feeling Feelings only love can give Lost in the eyes of the moon Knowing our destiny will be soon Maybe it'll be today Maybe it will be tomorrow So far away although it's just another day Why do I feel such sorrow? Maybe the moon was made for love Maybe it was made for hope and a start I just know, the moon has taught me much And it has really changed the way I feel It's brought serenity to my heart. So remember next time you see the moon Maybe that special someone Is looking at it too.I don't know. .i dont' really like the part where it rushes in to "Maybe the moon. ." but maybe it' jsut me. .if you have any suggestions will you plz give them to me because i really like this poem :) hehe thanx Written January 28th, 2002 © on Jan 28 2002 02:57 PM PST   18 • 0 • 8

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