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Sunset

By TwoCrowsLaughing

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As conversation waged It’s battle on my ears I saw you out the window Erasing all my fears The subtle winds that blew Your redness in the sky I could feel you calling me Beckoned to me ‘outside’ I longed to put away This visit I endured By someone who’s a stranger now Yet used to make me feel secure For to see your colors reigning In that deep, magenta sky Out the window of this fortress Made me long to go outside To feel the warmth of sunset Feel the kiss of sweet, pure wind And put away all troubles Once again I succumb to A sunset ©2000 Crow Majik all rights reservedI wrote this after a visit with the ex.......couldn't wait for him to leave due to the fact that his rantings were grinding at me while the sun set deeper and redder to match my mood. I took comfort in the sunset that day! Its what got me through the last battle.... Written October 1st, 2001 © on Oct 01 2001 02:17 AM PST   0 • 10

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