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If I Controlled You

By VampireGirl

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

If I controlled your thoughts I would allow you to only think of me I would leave no question in wonder of how your mind should be. I would have a list of things for you to do everyday I would keep your mind safe and guided in different ways. Your mind would be a puzzle that you must put together to find out who you really are. In your breath you would feel bitter, in knowing that I'm holding you in my control. Your eyes would see only what I want them to see your lips would tingle, and speak words that I would choose for you to speak. Everything you do, would be an over whelming power that would master over you there is nothing you could do to stop it, and there would be no cure for you. I would have my name whispered through your ears I would give you flashes of memories of all our loving years. You would never have the chance to think of another, you would never be debating rather you could even go cheap on me, you would drown your heart in my love and never leave me. Written December 9th, 2001 © on Dec 09 2001 12:21 PM PST, Shelly   0 • 10

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