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Murder Her

By VampireGirl

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The Killers mind is rushing And he speaks of moments of trust, before he brushes his victims hair with a light thrust. The victims thoughts empty, as her body is unsteady and shocked. Killers reactions to her feelings is nothing but a plot. The reactions of the actions: Plane and simple, He thought of it for days before he made his moves. The victims comments: I had a gut feeling about working late that night, I saw a man walk up to me, with a big pocket knife. Killers thoughts: hours of planning it worked out swell, I will bring this bitch down, even to hell. Victims parents reactions: My only doughtier, this must be ransom but we aren't sure. Mothers thoughts: the killer must want my doughtier because she's pure: (Truth) She's a slut, and a whore that feeds off men's fake love, She's a sinner and a believer in, god and hell above. fathers thoughts of victim: All I need is a phone call from this son of a bitch, Ill track the phone line, in only minutes. Back to the killer: When I make this kill I will look death in the eye. She will scream out loud, while her soul begins to fly. Victims thoughts: I didn't have a chance to say good bye. Written January 4th, 2002 © on Jan 04 2002 10:25 AM PST, Shelly   0 • 9 • 10

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