Rate Me!
By VampireGirl
When you go down the list what do you see? Some How your beautiful eyes skipped over me. Can't you see the title screaming out: read me? I wonder who will look next? if anyone will look at all? Do they not find my title, or poem very appealing? I worry that my writing isn't good enough? If it was, then why would I be ignored?. I comment on all your poems, I say how I truly feel. I give expressions and emotions that are real. I give you stars, and rate your poems, as I will. but after awhile of getting 33 views, and only ten comments from you. It makes me worry, and it makes my vision go blurry. And I wonder why? why do you come to my poem, if you didn't count on rating me? did you miss something? maybe a mystery? Did you come to this poem just to see? there must be a reason? there must be something more, Rate this poem, And ill make sure, That when I go to your poem, Ill rate you to. Because I would NEVER skip over you. Written November 2nd, 2001 © on Nov 02 2001 11:16 AM PST, Shelly 0 • 8
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