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Tragic Mistakes

By VampireGirl

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

This sensation over baring my soul. The loud noise of brutal terror and letting my ruptured heart and body go. You invaded My mind you closed out the doors of me falling in time. The closet I see no light, The darkness covered my sky. The morning breeze ill never feel again upon my body of lies. The summers longest kiss, the graces of sleeping in this The blossom of my rose. The flooded seas, and the innocent leafs. So wretched and compelled you've betrayed me. The unexplored places of my Identity. I've lost my place in time, I've lost my heart, my soul and mind. You've carved your name between my legs, leaving the worst pain upon my skin. The stench reeks off of mildew milk, and a day dream of where a child's been. The rusty flowers become steal. They rot to the Coors, and will never again know how to feel, while lying naked and bruised. The petals slowly feil down with the dripping blood. In my visions and fantasies, the first day of fake love. Our eyes spoke a million words. Have I lost it all? Did I catch my fall? Have I made this up in my head. Does this virgin sleep alone naked in her bed? Written March 1st, 2002 © on Mar 01 2002 11:46 AM PST, Shelly   0 • 10

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