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By acidcrys

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Can you stop for a moment, and breathe me in? Tell me that I'm beautiful now and will always be. Hold me close even when I'm far away. Be Proud of me even when I'm failing miserably. Speak of me with a smile on your face. Remember the good times instead of the bad. Cry happy tears when I actually win the race. Put your hand on my back instead of across my face. Admit I've done my best, not that you or he could of done better. Embrace my shaking shoulders, instead of giving me a cold one. Claim me as your daughter, not your mistake. Say you love me, even when I don't say it first. Hope the best for me, instead of guessing the worst. Teach me instead of punishing me. Accept my mistakes, help me to not make them again. Let me live and set the path for my future. Do things for me because you want to, not because you feel you have to. Ask me about my life.. at least once for the first time? Get to know me before you claim to know me. Give me my life back, accept me into yours. please?sigh. i know it kind of rambles..but..yeah. Written October 2nd, 2001 © on Oct 02 2001 02:15 PM PST   18 • 0 • 8

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