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Sunrise End

By acidcrys

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A faint, hesitant sigh ...I knew before I even opened my eye A quick whispered good-bye ...god no, please don't let me cry foot steps travel across the floor ...has my love suddenly become a bore? murmured 'I dont love you anymore' ...struck to my very core 'when you wake up darling, I'll be out of your life ...And I, Darling, will begin an endless strife.well.. I always really loved this one because it just brought such a strong image to mind.. of a woman lying in bed after a night of love.. and having to witness her lover leave while he thinks she's asleep. I had to space it out and use '...' to show where its the female thinking Written September 23rd, 2001 © on Sep 22 2001 05:03 PM PST   0 • 1

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